Certain developments - sex with the friends - are a bit rushed I'd say, but I can tell you are putting a lot of heart into this, so keep going. The two fights scenes we have gotten so far have been top tier, very hype.
Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad you’re enjoying the fight scenes, I’ve put a lot of effort into making them. They might feel a bit short, but I’ll do my best to improve and make them even better. I really appreciate your support.
Honestly, I am a fan of short fight scenes, they make it so each attacks carries satisfying weight behind it. Like, in a death battle each attack should feel like it can be life/battle ending, like things could end the very next instant, and if foes keep fighting for a very long time it's easy to lose that tension. Short fights also make it believable that no one else has time to notice and intervene. So imo, keep doing what you're doing!
Game is funny. I like the MC having two haircolors
The Story is also nice that far
Now the things you could improve:
When the background music turns off its kinda quiet.. too quiet. A few soundeffects would really make it 👌🏼
The H-scenes are kinda short, maybe you put a “finish” button into these scenes? And remember point 1 👌🏼
That’s just my way of humor, but the MC should develop some ‘striptease habbit’ if it comes to am H-scene.. kinda like Grey from Fairy Tail.. Would be funny 😁
But Game is nice. I like the multiple story timetables 👌🏼✨️
Been playing this for about an hour now, the characters look rather good and not just plain stock model with just different hair, clothes and body type.
Dialogue feels somewhat blant in some places but at least I didn't find any grammar mistakes (so far) but I did see some missing "." and spaces between words. Some of the transitions feel... sudden? Same goes for the H-scenes or at least the second one. I'm honestly not sure if the animation are made by the dev or just stock animations provided by the engine. Choice selections are a bit too dark in my opinion, literally had to move closer and squint my eyes to see what it said.
The reason on how the MC is suddenly able to cast/create magic isn't explained and also feels sudden. The scene where MC fights... Derak? Derek? Feels unfinished and rushed, but hey, at least the magic looks cool, right?
Overall not a bad VN so far, could use slightly more polishing, probably would recommend to a friend at some point.
On the side not, is there a discord server for this game? If not, is it planned to be made? It would honestly be a good idea to make one.
Thanks for the feedback! Glad to hear you like the character designs. I’ll work on improving the dialogue, transitions, and fixing the choice menu so it’s easier to read.
No Discord yet, but I’m considering it. Appreciate you playing and sharing your thoughts!
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Might Add dialogs to the H scenes, to make it more immersive, not just watching animations. But the game renders, story is Good!
Is there a walkthrough for the game?
Are any of the animations custom?
hmm interesting not lesbians but there is multiple penetration similar to mmf
Certain developments - sex with the friends - are a bit rushed I'd say, but I can tell you are putting a lot of heart into this, so keep going. The two fights scenes we have gotten so far have been top tier, very hype.
Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad you’re enjoying the fight scenes, I’ve put a lot of effort into making them. They might feel a bit short, but I’ll do my best to improve and make them even better. I really appreciate your support.
Honestly, I am a fan of short fight scenes, they make it so each attacks carries satisfying weight behind it. Like, in a death battle each attack should feel like it can be life/battle ending, like things could end the very next instant, and if foes keep fighting for a very long time it's easy to lose that tension. Short fights also make it believable that no one else has time to notice and intervene. So imo, keep doing what you're doing!
Game is funny. I like the MC having two haircolors The Story is also nice that far
Now the things you could improve:
But Game is nice. I like the multiple story timetables 👌🏼✨️
Thanks for the feedback! I’m really glad to hear you’re enjoying the game.
Good but you need to put text or next scene buttons in the sex scenes cause they are easy to skip
There's a little typo in the game profile
which is
This game is currently in developmen
u miss a T bro
Already fixed it, really appreciate you looking out!
Been playing this for about an hour now, the characters look rather good and not just plain stock model with just different hair, clothes and body type.
Dialogue feels somewhat blant in some places but at least I didn't find any grammar mistakes (so far) but I did see some missing "." and spaces between words. Some of the transitions feel... sudden? Same goes for the H-scenes or at least the second one. I'm honestly not sure if the animation are made by the dev or just stock animations provided by the engine. Choice selections are a bit too dark in my opinion, literally had to move closer and squint my eyes to see what it said.
The reason on how the MC is suddenly able to cast/create magic isn't explained and also feels sudden. The scene where MC fights... Derak? Derek? Feels unfinished and rushed, but hey, at least the magic looks cool, right?
Overall not a bad VN so far, could use slightly more polishing, probably would recommend to a friend at some point.
On the side not, is there a discord server for this game? If not, is it planned to be made? It would honestly be a good idea to make one.
Thank you for your attention and goodnight.
(I also might support the game if it improves)
Thanks for the feedback! Glad to hear you like the character designs. I’ll work on improving the dialogue, transitions, and fixing the choice menu so it’s easier to read.
No Discord yet, but I’m considering it. Appreciate you playing and sharing your thoughts!
I could probably help you set one up if ya want,
Sure, I’d love your help setting it up.
My discord is Mr dog1736b just shoot me up and I'll respond when I have time (I got a bit too much of it anyway)
I answer so late cuz my Gmail is slow at informing me about shit